Free Fall - Haiku

dangling, wet, surprised
caught in the web suspended
leaves should know better
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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June 10, 2019 at 9:12 AM
Love it Earl.
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June 10, 2019 at 10:01 AM
Hi Maureen, Thanks! As you know, it is hard to cram a big story into a tiny 5-7-5 lined restricted space but I'm glad you got the picture. I hope you have a wonderful day. Earl
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