Manny Paras Poet Verse

Free Fall

Same route

Of life's alley,

Comfort zone keeps me safe

From strings of fear.


Until,

I opened nets

Free fall to adventure,

Deliverance!



Contest for Thread of Syllables 
Manny Pizon
4- 20-2014

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Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2014 at 11:16 PM awesome way to take this theme. Congratulations. I loved the message in yours.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 24, 2014 at 4:11 AM Beautiful write Manny,,, i cud actually feel the emotions here,, Congrats on great win!

Dr.Ram Mehta April 23, 2014 at 10:42 PM Nice take on the theme of thread. Congrats on a fine win, manny

Nette Onclaud April 23, 2014 at 11:48 AM taking chances is our birthright... a brave write, manny.. sweet cheers on your fine win in my contest.. huggs

Verlena S. Walker April 23, 2014 at 10:39 AM Nice Manny... Congratulations in placing in Nett's contest... Verlena