Free As a Bird

"Don't call me.  I'll call you."
  Not an easy thing to not do.

But it must be your lucky day
 cause you've got your way.

When we met I should have known
  you weren't really full grown.

In your hand you held my heart
  but you wanted another part.

I gave it freely and now you're gone,
  gone with the wind you blew in and out on.

Now you're free as the bird that sat in my tree,
  free as the bird that flew away from me.

So fly away,
  fly away,
  fly away free.
You're free as a bird just like me.


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  Feb. 26, 2007
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 8:59 PM
I sense that you are hurt. Anyway I enjoyed your poem. it is late it is my bed time. Good night.
Duet Avatar
July 13, 2017 at 12:07 AM
Yes, I WAS hurt...not any more though. Thanks for reading, Darlene. Carole Duet
Rycroft Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 2:16 PM
Great poem Carol x
Duet Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 11:33 PM
Thanks Wendy! Carole
Dietrich Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 6:05 PM
Love this one. It's clear as a bell and the last part is awesome!
Duet Avatar
January 9, 2017 at 12:04 AM
Glad you liked it, Andrea. Thanks for reading. Carole
Salehi Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 7:44 PM
I am enslaved to the message, of all else say no more...
Duet Avatar
December 30, 2016 at 11:11 PM
Thank you for your interesting comment, Pashang. Carole Duet
Green Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 5:46 AM
Being free is not all it's cracked up to be. Sure it looks nice on paper but inside you are ripped to shreds. Very sad feeling Carole.
Duet Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 10:49 PM
I know, Chris. Thank you for reading. Carole
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