Free

I want to be Free like a bird soaring through the sky Free like a plane that goes flying by Free like ships sailing on the sea Free to be whatever I want to be I want to be Free as a horse trotting through the city Free as the flowers that are oh so pretty Free as the sun that shines so bright Free as the moon that glows in the night To be Free means a lot to me, so take it from me someday we'll all be Free.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2013 6:53:00 AM

Gwen, , '''CONGRATULATIONS''' On your featured poem of the week... Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... -XOX- Love Linda

John Posey

Date: 12/23/2012 8:06:00 PM

Freedom is a gift from God. He gave to you and me. But some will try and take it away, That's why freedom isn't free. Great poem, Gwen.... Merry Christmas hugs all around..... Jake

Joe Inka

Date: 12/5/2012 12:08:00 AM

Ahhh the dream of freedom. It comes in so many forms, and you've expressed them beautifully with great rhyme. Well done

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
Date: 12/6/2012 8:13:00 AM

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/31/2012 6:57:00 AM

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a comment on my poetry Gwen. It truly was appreciated. Love, Carol