Free

Free 

I stand here free
wondering if I truly am
always wrong in my thought
when it’s not as you taught

I stand here free
wondering why in speech
When I make as I please
The powers, I displease

Monger of terror, or infidel
must I in whatever you will
procure faith with unreason;
to my mind, commit treason?

Should I continue to subsist
unfettered, by your dictates
yet, equal to you by figment;
forever guilty by my pigment?

I stand here unrestrained
yet, wondering about shackles:
why the physical was abolished;
The mental, never demolished

I stand here wielding power
Power to break your every chain;
In dearth, still dream big dreams
fed infinitely by my inner streams


Originally Written on 13/10/2018 
for "I stand here" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Craig Cornish.

Rewritten on 29/10/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/20/2018 11:36:00 AM
Hello Sandison, This is an excellent poem, love the way it flows. Regards. Mpho Kgaswane.
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Date: 10/13/2018 1:01:00 PM
A thoughtful discourse..well done Sandison.
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Date: 10/15/2018 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. Sandison
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