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Fred Ain'T That Dumb

She had a mare - The night was fair. I rode a Bay At end of day. I said,"Let's ride. You by my side. The stars are out To light our route." The night was cool, And like some fool, I took no note She had no coat. With no warm clothes I fear she froze, And killed my plan To be her man. I fed her rum To thaw her some Til her eyes crossed - Lord, she was sauced. She could not ride - She cursed my hide, And as we walked - The whole town talked. They laughed at her, She cursed a slur Then went to sleep In one big heap. I hear she wed A guy named Fred. He ain't that dumb To give her rum. 1/31/18 For Silent One's Contest 128 Words

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Date: 2/15/2018 10:34:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Larry - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/6/2018 7:21:00 PM
Larry, a witty and wonderful write. Totally enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your great win. ~Susan
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/6/2018 10:40:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. "Witty" is music to my ears as I sometimes try for that and miss.LOL
Date: 2/6/2018 10:45:00 AM
Lol! Love this! The form suits your story to a T! Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/6/2018 10:38:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen...you're most generous
Date: 2/5/2018 8:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Larry! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/6/2018 10:38:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. Always nice to hear from you!
Date: 2/4/2018 5:28:00 PM
What a funny poem, Larry. Congrats on your win. I chuckled out loud. Delightful read. Thank you.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/6/2018 10:37:00 PM
Thank you kindly. Always pleased to hear that someone chuckled!!
Date: 2/4/2018 3:44:00 PM
Great take on the contest Larry.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/6/2018 10:36:00 PM
Because of the encouragement you gave me whn I first joined PoetrySoup,I always smile when I place in one of your contests.Makes it special..Thanks!

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