Fred Ain'T That Dumb

She had a mare -
The night was fair.
I rode a Bay
At end of day.

I said,"Let's ride.
You by my side.
The stars are out
To light our route."

The night was cool,
And like some fool,
I took no note
She had no coat.

With no warm clothes
I fear she froze,
And killed my plan 
To be her man.

I fed her rum 
To thaw her some
Til her eyes crossed -
Lord, she was sauced.

She could not ride -
She cursed my hide,
And as we walked -
The whole town talked.

They laughed at her,
She cursed a slur
Then went to sleep
In one big heap.

I hear she wed
A guy named Fred.
He ain't that dumb 
To give her rum.

1/31/18
For Silent One's Contest 128 Words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barden Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 10:34 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, Larry - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)
Ashley Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 7:21 PM
Larry, a witty and wonderful write. Totally enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your great win. ~Susan
Bradfield Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 10:40 PM
Thank you, Susan. "Witty" is music to my ears as I sometimes try for that and miss.LOL
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February 6, 2018 at 10:45 AM
Lol! Love this! The form suits your story to a T! Congratulations on your win! xomo
Bradfield Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 10:38 PM
Thank you, Maureen...you're most generous
Roper Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 8:53 PM
Congratulations on your win, Larry! Hugs Eve ~`*
Bradfield Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 10:38 PM
Thanks, Eve. Always nice to hear from you!
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 5:28 PM
What a funny poem, Larry. Congrats on your win. I chuckled out loud. Delightful read. Thank you.
Bradfield Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 10:37 PM
Thank you kindly. Always pleased to hear that someone chuckled!!
One Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 3:44 PM
Great take on the contest Larry.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Bradfield Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Because of the encouragement you gave me whn I first joined PoetrySoup,I always smile when I place in one of your contests.Makes it special..Thanks!
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