Freaking Proud

my great white hunter
i'm so freaking proud of you 
for keeping the peace

no idea the hell
that you must try to cool down
too much emotion

too much dysfunction
sorry it's so hard for you
do the best you can
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rich Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 8:52 PM
Enjoyed this poetry this evening and definantly read from you. Have a great night.:)
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August 19, 2010 at 8:26 PM
love it !!,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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