Freak

your standing watching the freak burn in the dead of night

all the tears of pain that run down you face

for the pain never stops

your tears of pain keep falling in to the flame's

here me cry here my die


you destroyed the heart in my eye's

so it time to burn forever more

for you lost the cure .


the night walker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hickman Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 9:22 PM
a very deep write,,but written very well with a lot of feeling,,thank you for all your reading of my words and for commenting upon them as well,,all the best in your writing future,,,Blessings..Cecil
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November 5, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Enjoyed reading the many diverse poems here today. I am glad to have came across your amongst these wonderful poems Duncan. Wishing you a magnificent weekend. Love, Carol
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