Freak

Tainted are the picture shows, From out the eyes of Freaks I know. Time trips on discolored days turned askew. Speculation is a game. For all the Freaks (are) in me.

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/2/2009 5:04:00 PM

Heather, Freaks- an interesting poetry topic. My husband was called a freak throughout life. And it hurt. a lot. I find your last line particularly interesting. God bless you and your freakiness...said with love. We all have our differences that make each one of us, God's children, very special. Individuality is God's specialty. Keep writing! Love, Dane

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/31/2009 6:59:00 AM

Do you think maybe in someway we are all a little freaky? I think we all have our moments whether good or bad. "Time trips on discolored days turned askew" interesting line, adds a bit of mystery and intrigue to the piece. Smiles from Lolita

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/31/2009 5:35:00 AM

This is like an excavation of a mysterious place, enticing and unknown. Love and peace

Madeleine Mclaughlin

Date: 3/31/2009 1:07:00 AM

I find this mysterious and interesting.