Franks

Ketchup
mustard
onions.

foodhaiku

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Dale Kruper

September 15, 2010 at 8:40 PM

yummy..great job

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

July 8, 2010 at 7:55 PM

Made me Hungry,,,,,Congrats on this being featured

Doris Culverhouse

July 6, 2010 at 7:32 AM

great poem, congrats on the feature this week enjoyed reading today!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 6, 2010 at 3:29 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Derrick. May you have many more features. Love,Carol

Adeleke Adeite

July 5, 2010 at 11:16 AM

well, i guess you need to go through the forms of poems so you could write exactly what is required!

Adeleke Adeite

July 5, 2010 at 10:59 AM

Congrats Derrick, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke

Gert W. Knop

July 5, 2010 at 7:28 AM

Mouthwatering although I prefer curry with the ketchup! But a Haiku should have the pattern 5/7/5, a Tanka 5/7/5/7/7 in number of syllables. Enjoyed your write and keep writing!! Thank you for your welcome comment on "Fragile"! Have a nice week...Gert