Franks

Ketchup mustard onions.

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Dale Kruper

Date: 9/15/2010 8:40:00 PM

yummy..great job

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

Date: 7/8/2010 7:55:00 PM

Made me Hungry,,,,,Congrats on this being featured

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/6/2010 7:32:00 AM

great poem, congrats on the feature this week enjoyed reading today!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/6/2010 3:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Derrick. May you have many more features. Love,Carol

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/5/2010 11:16:00 AM

well, i guess you need to go through the forms of poems so you could write exactly what is required!

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/5/2010 10:59:00 AM

Congrats Derrick, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/5/2010 7:28:00 AM

Mouthwatering although I prefer curry with the ketchup! But a Haiku should have the pattern 5/7/5, a Tanka 5/7/5/7/7 in number of syllables. Enjoyed your write and keep writing!! Thank you for your welcome comment on "Fragile"! Have a nice week...Gert

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/4/2010 9:57:00 AM

Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/4/2010 8:53:00 AM

Big smiles, Derrick. Hot dogs are always on my Fourth of July menu! Have a great holiday. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/4/2010 6:14:00 AM

Thanks for the comment. Please re-read my poem. It is not the scent of the hair but on the shirt.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/3/2010 6:52:00 PM

Are you sure about it to be in a haiku form? Of course you have used very fine images

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/3/2010 4:47:00 PM

Got a chuckle..Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara