Kim Rodrigues Poet Carpe Diem

Frankly Benjamin

The first three lines of this verse are the magicicada — additional letters are put in for effect. Perhaps you see a kite? 


FRANKLY BENJAMIN

electricity
even if
a bit eccentric
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7/2/2019
Magicicada 535
Carpe Diem
Sponsor: Maureen McGreavy

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Quoth Theraven July 6, 2019 at 7:31 PM Kim, I see the kite; and I see what you did there with Ben. Well done. -Richard Kim Rodrigues July 6, 2019 at 10:02 PM Thank you, Richard! :)

Caren Krutsinger July 4, 2019 at 11:11 AM I see a kite, and think you have merged more than one kind of poem. Fine writing and extraordinary typing! The effect is magnificent. Kim Rodrigues July 6, 2019 at 10:02 PM Thank you, Caren!

Richard Lamoureux July 3, 2019 at 5:33 PM You are in great form and perhaps a bit eccentric in the most delightful of ways. Kim Rodrigues July 6, 2019 at 10:02 PM Thank you, Richard!

Panagiota Romios July 3, 2019 at 12:07 PM Kim. My friend! You are so incredibly bright! Best wishes PANAGIOTA Kim Rodrigues July 3, 2019 at 12:27 PM Thank you, Panagiota!

Jennifer Proxenos July 3, 2019 at 11:52 AM Hey Kim, Wise one - I foresee a win! Best of luck! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Kim Rodrigues July 3, 2019 at 12:28 PM We will see! Thanks, Jennifer!

Gershon Wolf July 2, 2019 at 9:16 PM This is advanced 'geniosity.' Maureen will love it, no doubt. Great one for the contest, Kim. :) gw Kim Rodrigues July 2, 2019 at 10:55 PM Thank you, Gershon! :)

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2019 at 7:23 PM that was so C l e v er I wrote clever downwards but I don't know if it will post that way!! Kim Rodrigues July 2, 2019 at 8:45 PM That’s ok! Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich July 2, 2019 at 7:23 PM crap, it did not do it