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Frankensteins Theory?!

Suspending ornaments within an abstracts reasonings.... Paramountic marvels of a phenomenas majestical wonders; these Perceptions perceived along the paragons trails towards, the swallowing castles Reflections amid the paradoxes silverish views; hues, of an artificial flavourings Beliefs upon the impratical balconies foresight of, utopians dreams.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ....A Frankensteins theory?! Note: Smile ~ Was considering the irony of certain things and, the love and light of All things so, decided to drop a humble crumb into the basket ~ "'Love,' Always," John!:) ~

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Kristina Reid-Hansen

Date: 4/7/2011 2:37:00 AM

I have been super busy and haven't got to stop by to read, but i am glad to be entertained by this one=)) THanks

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 1/8/2011 11:11:00 PM

this was a joy to read my dear friend! it has been far too long since i have stopped by to marvel at your work and the world is has created! i loved the title it pulled my right in and this piece did NOT disappoint! many warm wishes my friend! --Madison ps: thanks as always for the wonderful comments they make me smile!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 1/3/2011 8:46:00 AM

Hmmm..where's the bigger part of this crumb, John? He was Dr Fankenstein, yes? I'm hoping my neurologist isn't related to him or he might get my parts mixed up? Be well, stay safe, love to you, Mikki

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2011 9:56:00 PM

well, I think the title is very fitting for it. If frankenstein were alive, I think he would write a poem like this, john! Luv, Andrea

Lynette Chachere

Date: 12/31/2010 4:28:00 PM

this is interesting. i've never read this book, or really heard of it. but it sounds worth it to look into. marvels & wonders are always the best subjects.they enlighten you. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/30/2010 12:00:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your ~~Magnificent~~ poetry this morning John as usual. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry so keep writing my dear friend. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/30/2010 11:31:00 AM

John, "Frankenstein" is my favorite novel. It was intended to expose the anguish of one who is rejected and cannot feel the appreciation of love. The "monster" had utopian dreams, but the world's "artificial flavorings" caused his good intentions to be rejected. This one definitely goes to my favorites for its wisdom and insight. Much love to you, my friend. Carolyn

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/30/2010 11:09:00 AM

Not to judge Frankenstein who being human lost his way on the yellow brick road, when at the crossroads, he chose "ego" for his companion. Another brilliantly gifted human whom I'm sure had nothing but good intentions but shunned humility. Well expressed as usual, dear John...As the New Year approaches, my very best wishes for blessings, joy, peace and happiness for you and your family from me with love! Always, Audrey