Francine's Sad Poem

Francine's poem hurting still in memory, been there too at the gate, is ya gonna jump old mate, then got a little grin, it might hurt, a bloody sin, made me hesitate... no consolation:( loves ya babe!... Had been dumped, love of me life, hey:) crossing the bridge,thoughts at play, ridge e didge i was going that day, but it looked cold n wet, might hurt i thought, hey, so i walked home at 3am, been working the Jet club, a bouncer in the valley, soon not short of love, the sad n distracted soon came to my door, the numbers piled up till no room for more, abused quite often by shielas 4 sure, shirt lifters abounded, dirt track riders haw haw:)
Don Johnson rambles on..17-aug-11
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August 19, 2011 at 1:34 AM
Enjoyed reading... good luck in the contest,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 10:17 AM
Thank you for sharing your creative poetry with us Don as usual. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 12:07 AM
'To be or not...' great poem. You are the bouncer at the door to death; who gets to go through. So, if I show up, don't let me in.
Johnson Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 1:29 AM
you caint come in here me boy, ole death don't need more humans, hit ya with the high voltage, John, jerk you alive exhuming... resurrection looming:} bye n by
Sivey Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 10:42 PM
You write the most imaginative poems! Thanks for uplifting my spirits, you have greatly shown me a picture!! Paint me some more!! --Good luck in the contest!
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August 16, 2011 at 7:15 PM
Good luck in Francine's contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and giving the poetic and inspired comments..Sara
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