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Framed In Glass

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Nathan D.

Date: 3/8/2013 8:30:00 AM

very lovely kimo

Kash Poet

Date: 2/17/2013 5:55:00 AM

Beautiful imagery here Debra.Congrats on your win in the contest.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2013 5:45:00 AM

Very descriptive work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/15/2013 7:43:00 PM

you painted a perfect winter scene, congrats on your win Debra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2013 7:32:00 PM

Debra.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2013 4:16:00 PM

Well, I am so pleased to see this one again as I go thru the winners list. BIG congrats to you, dear. Soupmail.

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/15/2013 3:55:00 PM

I can just see the red cardinals against the white snow. A beautiful picture. Congrats on your win, Debra! Love, Kim

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/15/2013 3:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win. A beautiful painting. Warm Smiles, Connie

Robert Johnson

Date: 2/13/2013 11:58:00 AM

Crystaline beauty of exquisite prose. A valentine picture of a natural rose. :)

Ann Roske

Date: 2/4/2013 9:14:00 AM

this is beautiful - I've not done a Kimo and this is inspiriation to try one.

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/3/2013 10:00:00 PM

There was a question about cardinal having three syllables, though I and the dictionary I used counted it as two..pronounced card-knal....but I took out the "of" so the syllable count in last line is now 6.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2013 6:24:00 PM

seriously, you have captured such a beautiful moment in time, the most important rule of this form.

Debra Squyres
Date: 2/3/2013 6:34:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. It was hard not to put movement into the scene. I first used the cardinals eating seed...and thought..that's movement..so changed it up.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2013 6:23:00 PM

WOWOWOW, one of the best kimo i have seen in a long time. FAVE

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/3/2013 5:10:00 PM

This is a very wonderful Kimo my friend! I enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!