Debra Squyres Poet Kimo

Framed In Glass

Framed in Glass

Starburst crystals cling to the window pane
Lavish mounting for a frame
Cardinals in the snow


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Form is Kimo: 3 lines wih10-7-6 syllable count

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Nathan D. March 8, 2013 at 8:30 AM very lovely kimo

Kash Poet February 17, 2013 at 5:55 AM Beautiful imagery here Debra.Congrats on your win in the contest.

Sara Kendrick February 16, 2013 at 5:45 AM Very descriptive work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Francine Roberts February 15, 2013 at 7:43 PM you painted a perfect winter scene, congrats on your win Debra

Poet Destroyer A February 15, 2013 at 7:32 PM Debra.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2013 at 4:16 PM Well, I am so pleased to see this one again as I go thru the winners list. BIG congrats to you, dear. Soupmail.

Kim Merryman February 15, 2013 at 3:55 PM I can just see the red cardinals against the white snow. A beautiful picture. Congrats on your win, Debra! Love, Kim

Connie Gildersleeve February 15, 2013 at 3:22 PM Congrats on your win. A beautiful painting. Warm Smiles, Connie

Robert Johnson February 13, 2013 at 11:58 AM Crystaline beauty of exquisite prose. A valentine picture of a natural rose. :)

Ann Roske February 4, 2013 at 9:14 AM this is beautiful - I've not done a Kimo and this is inspiriation to try one.

Debra Squyres February 3, 2013 at 10:00 PM There was a question about cardinal having three syllables, though I and the dictionary I used counted it as two..pronounced card-knal....but I took out the "of" so the syllable count in last line is now 6.

Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2013 at 6:24 PM seriously, you have captured such a beautiful moment in time, the most important rule of this form. Debra Squyres February 3, 2013 at 6:34 PM Thanks, Andrea. It was hard not to put movement into the scene. I first used the cardinals eating seed...and thought..that's movement..so changed it up.

Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2013 at 6:23 PM WOWOWOW, one of the best kimo i have seen in a long time. FAVE

Russell Sivey February 3, 2013 at 5:10 PM This is a very wonderful Kimo my friend! I enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a spectacular piece, Great Work!!