Framed

The mood is framed by last night's rain Fog clings like beggarlice Damp air with pastel view of sky Fog and mist wraps with ice The roosters sing in alto chorus Against shrouded white sky A bird flew with short wings-sings-flies Amazing feat so high It is wonderful cool like fall A day made to enjoy Despite the circumstance there's good Be glad in it rejoice Today is the day for the surgery Around 2 or 3 this afternoon We have to be there at noon I plan on doing a contest when I return_THINK about a paragraph then turning it into a poem DETAILS later...

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Jack Horne

Date: 8/4/2012 12:18:00 PM

I love the positive outlook in this one, Sara - and could hear those roosters, lol. I do hope all went well for Tommy. And congrats on your wins

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/3/2012 5:23:00 PM

Hi Sara; I,m back. I loved your poem and I'm sorry that you have to have surgery. You are not alone. Jesus is with you and my prayers too. lucilla

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 8/3/2012 4:13:00 PM

Hello Sara, Love this beauty honey.....Don't follow in regards to surgery. Sorry about this, will pray for you .............Love, Shar

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/3/2012 12:25:00 PM

Best wishes for the surgery, nice write Sara xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/3/2012 10:45:00 AM

Beautiful chorus of a write my friend! I really enjoyed the incredible poem you have so illustriously written! I just love fall poetry, it makes me feel so good whenever I read them! And you write some great fall poetry Sara! I'll be thinking of you during the surgery! Hope all works out well! Awesome Work!!