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Frail

Weary eyes gazed to the sky. Pleading for the sun to beam a hope of comfort. Mind wandering in the midst of wind. As to why he was paying for his father’s sin. Petite hands trembling. As he fumbled in bewilderment. Skinned down to the naked bone. A feeble body diminishing suddenly, amongst a memory leisurely deteriorating. With only the remembrance of purple leaves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/11/2013 4:26:00 PM
a deep imagery, to remember and the last line leaves it all in frailty....... enjoyed.......... LUV............. *Skat
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Date: 6/11/2013 8:47:00 AM
Hmm.... Sounds like me.... Nice and creative. great writing.... Jake
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Date: 6/11/2013 8:46:00 AM
A powerful write my friend!!
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