Frail

Weary eyes gazed to the sky.
Pleading for the sun to beam a hope of comfort.
Mind wandering in the midst of wind.
As to why he was paying for his father’s sin.
Petite hands trembling. 
As he fumbled in bewilderment.
Skinned down to the naked bone.
A feeble body diminishing suddenly, 
amongst a memory leisurely deteriorating. 
With only the remembrance of purple leaves.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 11, 2013 at 4:26 PM
a deep imagery, to remember and the last line leaves it all in frailty....... enjoyed.......... LUV............. *Skat
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June 11, 2013 at 8:47 AM
Hmm.... Sounds like me.... Nice and creative. great writing.... Jake
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June 11, 2013 at 8:46 AM
A powerful write my friend!!
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