Kim Rodrigues Poet Haiku

Fragrantly Suited

             mutton chop whiskers
     grandpa puffs cherrywood pipe
dislodging smoke rings

6/22/2019
MagiCicada 13 or 17 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Maureen McGreavy
Syllables: 5/7/5

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Janice Canerdy July 1, 2019 at 1:31 PM CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Kim! So descriptive! Janice Kim Rodrigues July 2, 2019 at 7:25 AM Thank you so much, Janice!

Ralph Sergi June 28, 2019 at 6:17 PM Well done , Kim! I never knew my granddad but I have met many since then. GOOD LUCK! Kim Rodrigues June 28, 2019 at 6:49 PM Thank you, Ralph!

Line Gauthier June 28, 2019 at 9:10 AM Lovely, Kim. Fond memories of my grand-father. Kim Rodrigues June 28, 2019 at 9:11 AM Thanks so much :)

Anisha Dutta June 26, 2019 at 9:44 PM NICE. Kim Rodrigues June 28, 2019 at 9:11 AM Thank you, Anisha!

Darlene De Beaulieu June 24, 2019 at 2:24 PM Hello Kim, this is a nice image. have a nice day my friend. Kim Rodrigues June 24, 2019 at 5:20 PM Thank you, Darlene!

Eve Roper June 23, 2019 at 9:09 PM Great imagery , Kim. Kim Rodrigues June 23, 2019 at 9:44 PM Thank you, Eve,

Tom Cunningham June 23, 2019 at 1:57 PM Lovely image Kim, can just see him in his dungarees on the porch. Good luck. Tom Kim Rodrigues June 23, 2019 at 2:21 PM Thanks, Tom :)

Kurt Ravidas June 23, 2019 at 9:54 AM A reality's screenshot. The reality with mutton chop whiskers) It's perfect, Kim. Kim Rodrigues June 23, 2019 at 11:51 AM Thanks! Hugs...Kim

Vijay Pandit June 23, 2019 at 7:20 AM Quite an original theme..well executed imagery--all the best, Kim. Kim Rodrigues June 23, 2019 at 7:56 AM Thank you, Vijay!

Caren Krutsinger June 23, 2019 at 3:56 AM "mutton chop whispers" made me smile. I have either never heard this term, or not heard it for a long, long time. But I instantly saw those whiskers. Nice one Kim! Kim Rodrigues June 23, 2019 at 6:44 AM Thank you, Caren! You in turn make me smile!