Nette Onclaud Poet Haiku

Fragrance of Spring

fragrance of new spring
   draping flowers with bright tints--
drizzle comes in pours

~
children swish through games
   under April's wet landscape--
ring-ring-a-roses


JCB Burl's Contest
 Fresh Traditional Haiku (5-7-5) Contest
6/4/2020

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Funom Makama June 8, 2020 at 8:56 PM Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!

L. J. Carber June 7, 2020 at 10:26 AM Congrats Nette on your top win!

JC Brul June 7, 2020 at 8:53 AM This is a sweet Haiku! Congrats on topping the list.

Paul Callus June 7, 2020 at 4:29 AM These two haiku are definitely fresh and appealing, Nette! Congratulation son placing first. Hugs // paul

Irfanulla Shariff June 6, 2020 at 10:52 PM Lovely Haiku and imagery! All the best!

Sam Kauffman June 6, 2020 at 1:22 PM Congratulations Nette on your top podium win. Wonderful images of spring!

Aditi Mishra June 6, 2020 at 10:29 AM Such a delightful picture of Spring. Congratulations on your win Nette :)

Regina Mcintosh June 5, 2020 at 8:40 PM Wonderfully written. Congrats and much love and blessings sent your way, Gina

Tom Cunningham June 4, 2020 at 1:42 PM A beautiful season, everything coming alive. Good luck Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu June 4, 2020 at 1:19 PM Hello Nette, a beautiful spring image. Enjoy your day my fiend.