Fragment of a Song

…
and in my mind
I'll always be the guy
who never once
gave up the dream
of clean whole-hearted life
of endless stars in nightly skies
and in the pair of bluest eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 6:50 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Capitano Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Really sweet Olavi.
Koskela Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 12:18 PM
Oh well, just a clumsy translation of the original Finnish. I could probably do a lot better with the "Each nigh spent alone is spent" originally written in English.
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