Fragment Eighteen Point Nine

You're so getting on my last nerve
Give me the respect I deserve
Drive straight ahead and do not swerve
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bocsa Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 1:37 PM
Beautiful Triolet in wich I found the Fight with the Angel ...and some other temptations like that of taking care a flower after you tamed it.
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July 27, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Thanks for taking time to read my work. I appreciate your insights. :)
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