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'Fragment of the soul' A mighty unpleasant zephyr, Slivered my soul into fragments, And blew away my most valuable fraction. Macrocosm became his hostelery, Having gained altruistic radiance, His silence became my tribulation. Snookered by lot of malarkey, Hoveled in dismay and haggling for aquittance, I died a silent death every moment. Now that time promulgates my totality, As I rediscover that fragment of my soul, My mind rests in serenity and content. Just as I regain my thunder, And manage to rise in bravado, To live a life that I would evince, Now a denizen of desires and aspirations!! Written on 14/9/13

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Date: 6/6/2014 6:16:00 AM
Bravo, Like a Lightning, a thunder and a Rain :) Congrats, Nicely expressed.
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Date: 5/26/2014 6:24:00 PM
I dearly love this . So much so that straight into my fav it goes. Thanks for the gift my friend and Congrats on the win too.
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Date: 3/20/2014 1:41:00 AM
A nice win.... SKAT
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Date: 3/20/2014 12:26:00 AM
Dr. Umps, Wow.. This is a smart poem.. I love it! Congrats!
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:41:00 PM
Dr Umpa:).... Congratulations, in Nathan's contest... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/23/2013 10:15:00 PM
wonderful win. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/20/2013 10:19:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your "Fragment" winning poem. xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/17/2013 4:43:00 AM
congrats on placing Shadow x smiles
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Date: 9/16/2013 4:26:00 PM
Congratulations, I like your poem.
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Date: 9/14/2013 9:33:00 AM
I think this should be some new form Triolet, Its rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB and all lines are in iambic tetrameter; Mrs Upma
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 9/14/2013 10:02:00 AM
Since it came straight from heart, I didn't bother much about the form. Thanks for your critical comments, I shall be more thoughtful in future.