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Fragility of recovery is like time in a bottle Like the time that bully punctured our special balloon We need no sense of gloom Like sands in an hourglass, we'd retrieve our past How long will we last. Fragility of recovery kindly ask; take heed Fragility of recovery is of concern to us indeed In case we should forget, as if we'll have no regret Fragility of recovery is as potent as our emotions We need no commotion. Fragility of recovery ask of us devotion And when I think of devotion, here's safe potion- We'll smell and taste all natural flavors of life They'll flow like streams of conscious joy delight Coming forth day and night When I think of devotion, life is like a sweet breeze Fragility of recovery can knock us to our knees So, to our Higher Power, we'll say, 'hold us please.' ... First written February of 2002 ...

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Date: 3/29/2016 5:57:00 PM
How sadly lovely.. my son knows this monster. One day hopefully he'll be able to "smell and taste all natural flavors of life They'll flow like streams of conscious joy delight. Coming forth day and night" Thnk you. this gives me hope.
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Date: 3/30/2016 9:56:00 AM
It works when we work it dear one. Us and a Higher Power we must call upon.
Date: 3/10/2016 10:07:00 PM
Very introspective and heartfelt. It's a delicate time of life, and thoughts must be handled with caution, lest they become a regretful action. I think you should be proud of yourself with your 15 year milestone. Our biggest enemies aren't external ... but internal.
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/11/2016 6:16:00 AM
I agree I have met the enemy, and the enemy was me. Thanks dear one, for another visit.
Date: 2/29/2016 9:01:00 AM
A lovely page with mind blowing lines. This is wonderful dear friend. Weldon and thank you for yet another excellent share
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/1/2016 5:24:00 PM
thanks Funom.
Date: 2/26/2016 9:35:00 AM
We all need that Higher Power in our lives..Thanks for the visit to my page..The owl was sad and said woooo!! Sara
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Date: 2/26/2016 11:18:00 AM
Just visited 'Two' love haiku.

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