Fragile Or Not

on the outside I'm a diamond
my edges cut through glass
I am up for the challenges
rally to each task
I make the decisions
and stand by each one
I shoot from the hip
my aim is right on

inside I am soft, fragile as a pearl
lustrous I shine,  but easily break
that's why I don't let very many get close
they will see the charade, and then it's too late

perfect I'm not...never claimed to be
I don't mean to maim others
and won't let them maim me
I tell you this first, as it all begins
you are one of the few, that I'm letting in
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 24, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Excellent write, enjoyed the metaphor using the diamond and pearl to describe the exterior and interior. Enjoyed the read.
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