Fragile Hearts


Feeling lost in twilight schemes through glowing lights of starlit dreams,
raw, my thoughts, like frozen streams, soon melt as mist in iced moonbeams,
and you, your eyes, so grey and grim, yet lips that curl with smiling gleams,
gasping heart cries out and screams through growing cracks and broken seams.

In you I've found my everything, my life, my soul you make them sing,
lost in all the love you bring with gentle breath on soft hushed wing.
Enthralled in dulcet voice I limn with painted words of love I cling.
Held close to breast your voice will ring surcease of pain from burst heart string.

Envisioned aura in my head encircles all my thoughts with dread
as with your words my soul is fed and withers slow from things you've said.
Reduced as if by simple whim, your gentle deeds I've left unread.
Touch me not in days ahead, with your caress I'll be mislead,

so, leave me now with eyes blood red, alone and cold and left for dead.


01-01-17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Daniel Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 8:26 AM
This is a favourite for me, James:) love your thoughts combined with beautiful internal rhymes:) a 7:)
Inman Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Jo, a kind thing for you to say.
Martin Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 1:16 AM
Great language and rhymes! Congratulations James! :-)
Inman Avatar
March 9, 2017 at 6:24 AM
Thanks Mark
Andresen Avatar
January 1, 2017 at 11:45 AM
- Impressive written and touching reading, superbly done James - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Inman Avatar
January 1, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Thank you. A sad note to start the new year. Happy 2017 and a new year hug for you.
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