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Fragile Heart

Foolish me Rejected, set free Again, lured back Grieved by what lacks In this romance Love’s a chancy dance Equality’s missing Healing’s not found in kissing Ever sinking lower Aware more hurt’s in store Realizing I’m to blame, too weak To pursue the change I should seek

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/23/2024 1:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful yet sad Acrostic write. Yes, a heart is fragile so handle with care. Have Blessed day writing away............

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/5/2024 11:17:00 PM

an impressive write which can be empowering if change wins, Janice...grreat job!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/6/2024 7:35:00 AM

Thanks a million, Nette. Janice

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/5/2024 1:52:00 PM

an excellent acrostic, janice, but a sad situation. if it's based on truth, i hope you find what you need to make a change or demand the equality you deserve...

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/6/2024 7:34:00 AM

I'm 72; I stopped looking many years ago! Thanks so much, Ilene! Janice