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Fox In Field of Snow

fox in field of snow
eyes focused on a rabbit...
dinner soon caught



 Contest Entry "Animal Haiku"
Honorable Mention

natureseasonshaiku

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Iolanda Scripca

Date: 12/2/2011 5:03:00 PM

Oooops! I don't want to be a rabbit! :0) Nice picture you painted here with so few words, dear Carol! A winner, for sure! Love, iolanda

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 11/30/2011 3:32:00 PM

Fine Haiku,Carol.Congrats on your HM in this contest....keep flying..

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/30/2011 3:26:00 PM

Rabbit better run for it. Loved your haiku. love phyl

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/30/2011 10:30:00 AM

Previously read your poem, but as was busy my mind was not concentrated to your poem. Now, just I have read your poem and caught it. Nice Haiku where animal nature is depicted clearly. Thanks for sharing.bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2011 7:05:00 AM

Thank you for your comments and for the congrats. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 11/30/2011 3:21:00 AM

Congratulations Carol on your win.Very nice haiku.Enjoyed.

David Williams

Date: 11/30/2011 2:11:00 AM

carol congrats on your win, rabbit had no chance..David

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/29/2011 11:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Have a nice day,bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/29/2011 10:49:00 PM

CAROL;-) ,.. Congratulations on your wonderful HAIKU..FOR DEBBIE~ Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/29/2011 9:58:00 PM

Now I feel like your avatar- heehee I mean if I were the rabbit, or wait, if I were the fox and soo hungry and saw the rabbit-- enjoyed this one Carol and congrats on all your wins! :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2011 9:46:00 PM

Glad to see this on the list, Carol. Congrats on your win.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/29/2011 7:06:00 PM

Awesome write Carol! Poor rabbit, he just wanted to jump! Outstanding transition from snow to rabbit to dinner, very nice!! Terrific Work!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/29/2011 2:57:00 PM

This lovely poem depicts the natural course of nature's creatures, Carol. Beautiful entry for Deb's contest. I'm sending winning wishes your way and prayers for a blessed holiday season. Love you, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2011 9:43:00 PM

Cute animal you chose, Carol. I would like to see a white fox in a field of snow!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/28/2011 8:46:00 PM

Hi, Carol.. lol... your avatar makes me want to say TICKLE~ TICKLE~ TICKLE... LOL.. SO cute.. about your poem: very nice and good luck in the contest....Enjoyed;-) thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good night,.. always,..p.d.

Mathias Yakubu

Date: 11/28/2011 6:33:00 PM

Picke nice piece Carol on fox... Am intigue with the fox and the snow.

John Rhinem

Date: 11/28/2011 6:14:00 PM

Smile! * This Is For YOU, & The Poet & Her Poem Just Aneath You * I Am, Going To Spare Both My Joyful Laughing Reflections & Deepest Thoughts Your So Called Poetry & Writes * Smile, Make It Happen!? * John!:) ˜

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