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Four Point Twelve: Parting

Must the petals fall now and

surrender to the wind?

Must I step back and 

willingly rescind?

This could be a subtle goodbye

for the buds of our future don't seem to multiply

The troubles and confusions are somehow impolite

So I seek out the advice of the night

But our stars refuse to answer me

Am I now on the threshold of our finale?

-Nicola An

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Date: 4/13/2021 10:07:00 PM
I like the personification of the night.
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Nicola An
Date: 5/21/2021 4:26:00 AM
Thank you very much ?? Bless you ?

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