Four Jets Streak Blue Sky

four jets streak blue sky directional opposites.. three pelicans soar
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Onclaud Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 4:13 AM
lovely flight for a 'ku, sara... enjoyed the imagery!..:) huggs!
Horne Avatar
April 7, 2012 at 7:11 AM
love this one, sara. it's great to read your poetry again
Devonshire Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 11:20 AM
Those pelicans can soar very fast and usually travel in V-formation. From your haiku, the reader gets a very clear image of the jets as well as the pelicans. Awesome, Sara! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 10:56 PM
wow, this is REALLY nice, Sara. Way to do a haiku.(so pelicans soar?)
Devonshire Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 11:20 AM
You bet pelicans soar. They fly very fast and quite high here.
A   Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 9:23 PM
Hi, Sara, nice to have you back.... this is a very lovely haiku... how was your vacation? always..pd
Anish Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 8:27 PM
Nice image about what you see when you look up to the heavens. Peace & love Matthew Anish
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