Shadow Hamilton Poet Haiku

Four Haiku's

Icy is the breeze
as it flows  over the Tundra
making big snow drifts 

Cheeky monkey waits
until your back is turned
then steals all your fruit

golden ray of sun
blazing paths full of sunlight
warms as it touches

rain teeming downward
flooding the marshy grasslands
beware the bog lands

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Ralph Mason August 9, 2013 at 7:56 AM I enjoyed your haiku shadow. Warm thoughts, Ralph Shadow Hamilton August 9, 2013 at 4:19 PM ty Ralph for looking in and reading Shadow x smiles

Kathryn Collins August 8, 2013 at 9:01 AM I'm in love with cheeky monkey Shadow Hamilton August 8, 2013 at 9:42 AM he does get you lol ty Kathy for reading Shadow x smiles

Peter Dome August 8, 2013 at 12:17 AM Wow you are so clever, I find this form almost impossible.very well done.Loved the one about the cheeky monkey. thank you for posting best wishes. Pete. Shadow Hamilton August 8, 2013 at 8:04 AM It's different horses for courses, some forms I find hard too Peter keep at it and it will get easier Ty for reading and enjoying Shadow x smiles

Robert Johnson August 7, 2013 at 4:35 PM Hauki's, haiku's, what's a poet to think. Is Shadow Hamilton starting to drink? Her train of thought has wondered some. She's all over the map. She's hot and cold and bought and sold. I think she's flipped her cap. Peace. :) Just having a little fun sweetie. :) Shadow Hamilton August 7, 2013 at 5:04 PM ah Robert sadly my drink is sparkling water tonight. As for my thoughts they whiz by at speed of light words desperately trying to be heard before forever lost Ty for the fun and for reading Shadow x smiles

Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2013 at 2:44 PM I enjoyed this walk in the grasslands! (and the snowy tundra!) Shadow Hamilton August 7, 2013 at 4:28 PM hi Andrea yes both are nice to visit ty for reading

Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2013 at 12:44 PM - Good work by all four ,Shadow !!! :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Shadow Hamilton August 7, 2013 at 4:29 PM Anne Lise Ty glad you enjoyed them Shadow x smiles

Poet Destroyer A August 7, 2013 at 7:42 AM four well done haiku's, with lovely imagery of change within these season's I feel, enjoyed, ~always, Linda Shadow Hamilton August 7, 2013 at 10:12 AM ty Linda i like the form of hauki simple yet exacting Shadow x smiles