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Four Haiku's

Icy is the breeze as it flows over the Tundra making big snow drifts Cheeky monkey waits until your back is turned then steals all your fruit golden ray of sun blazing paths full of sunlight warms as it touches rain teeming downward flooding the marshy grasslands beware the bog lands

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/9/2013 7:56:00 AM
I enjoyed your haiku shadow. Warm thoughts, Ralph
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Date: 8/9/2013 4:19:00 PM
ty Ralph for looking in and reading Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/8/2013 9:01:00 AM
I'm in love with cheeky monkey
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:42:00 AM
he does get you lol ty Kathy for reading Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/8/2013 12:17:00 AM
Wow you are so clever, I find this form almost impossible.very well done.Loved the one about the cheeky monkey. thank you for posting best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:04:00 AM
It's different horses for courses, some forms I find hard too Peter keep at it and it will get easier Ty for reading and enjoying Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/7/2013 4:35:00 PM
Hauki's, haiku's, what's a poet to think. Is Shadow Hamilton starting to drink? Her train of thought has wondered some. She's all over the map. She's hot and cold and bought and sold. I think she's flipped her cap. Peace. :) Just having a little fun sweetie. :)
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Date: 8/7/2013 5:04:00 PM
ah Robert sadly my drink is sparkling water tonight. As for my thoughts they whiz by at speed of light words desperately trying to be heard before forever lost Ty for the fun and for reading Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/7/2013 2:44:00 PM
I enjoyed this walk in the grasslands! (and the snowy tundra!)
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Date: 8/7/2013 4:28:00 PM
hi Andrea yes both are nice to visit ty for reading
Date: 8/7/2013 12:44:00 PM
- Good work by all four ,Shadow !!! :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/7/2013 4:29:00 PM
Anne Lise Ty glad you enjoyed them Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/7/2013 7:42:00 AM
four well done haiku's, with lovely imagery of change within these season's I feel, enjoyed, ~always, Linda
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Date: 8/7/2013 10:12:00 AM
ty Linda i like the form of hauki simple yet exacting Shadow x smiles