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Four Haiku's

Icy is the breeze as it flows over the Tundra making big snow drifts Cheeky monkey waits until your back is turned then steals all your fruit golden ray of sun blazing paths full of sunlight warms as it touches rain teeming downward flooding the marshy grasslands beware the bog lands

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Ralph Mason

Date: 8/9/2013 7:56:00 AM

I enjoyed your haiku shadow. Warm thoughts, Ralph

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/9/2013 4:19:00 PM

ty Ralph for looking in and reading Shadow x smiles

Kathryn Collins

Date: 8/8/2013 9:01:00 AM

I'm in love with cheeky monkey

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/8/2013 9:42:00 AM

he does get you lol ty Kathy for reading Shadow x smiles

Peter Dome

Date: 8/8/2013 12:17:00 AM

Wow you are so clever, I find this form almost impossible.very well done.Loved the one about the cheeky monkey. thank you for posting best wishes. Pete.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/8/2013 8:04:00 AM

It's different horses for courses, some forms I find hard too Peter keep at it and it will get easier Ty for reading and enjoying Shadow x smiles

Robert Johnson

Date: 8/7/2013 4:35:00 PM

Hauki's, haiku's, what's a poet to think. Is Shadow Hamilton starting to drink? Her train of thought has wondered some. She's all over the map. She's hot and cold and bought and sold. I think she's flipped her cap. Peace. :) Just having a little fun sweetie. :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/7/2013 5:04:00 PM

ah Robert sadly my drink is sparkling water tonight. As for my thoughts they whiz by at speed of light words desperately trying to be heard before forever lost Ty for the fun and for reading Shadow x smiles