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Four Ghosts

Four ghosts came meeting Gave each other a greeting Always met at this cemetry They were all related, you see Great grandfather fought World War One Until that day he was shot and then gone He died at the age of being thirty two Never got to the change of things to do Grandfather was who died in World War Two Shot dead, out of the blue He died aged only twenty one He never got to hold his new baby son The Grandson fell as the years past Killed in Desert Storm, explosive blast His poor child was raised by his Dad The rain fell on a day so sad Afghanistan is where the son was shot dead A sniper put a bullet in his head So there are four graves next to each other They hope there will not be another So these four ghosts meet and salute now The only way that they could, somehow If you listen, you hear them sing out loud Four War Heroes that fell doing their country proud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/10/2010 11:55:00 AM
I had to stop back and thank you for your kind comment Chris. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:08:00 AM
So tenderly written, Chris. It's a very creative piece that touches the reader's heart. Just thinking of four war hero family members meeting in heaven is so touching. Too many wars, too many losses, too many children growing up without fathers. Welcome to poetry soup, Chris. I love your poem! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 8/10/2010 7:11:00 AM
I love this one:) it's cleverly done, Chris, perhaps you'll consider entering it in the next contest here? Thank you for your recent comment on my poem:)
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Date: 8/9/2010 11:37:00 PM
enjoyed sarah x
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Date: 8/9/2010 2:09:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write today..looking forward to many more.. keep checking the contest page to enter this one..with luv..
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Date: 8/9/2010 12:12:00 PM
I was gone and did not read any poetry the past weekend. So I am trying to get some read today. I am pleased that yours is among what I have read today and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Chris. Love, Carol
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