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Four Crows On 76th Street

Four Crows on 76th Street High above the intersection, Four Crows look out on the rest of us. Some of us stop at their light, some of us turn right or left. The Four Crows watch all this and nudge each other on occasion, or hop to the other side of the Four Crows, establishing their lineage in a different degree of pecking order, only they understand. The Crow on the right nudges and pecks a bit at the Crow next to him…this makes the other three unsteady on the 76th street sign for the briefest moment. Settled again, they watch cars stop again at the light, and others, …turn right or left. 07/07/10

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Date: 3/24/2013 8:28:00 PM
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Date: 7/19/2010 9:13:00 AM
Great observation...Amazing that they can survive in the big city..One day well maybe I should turn that thought into a poem...Do I have your curiosity going yet? Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..SK
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Date: 7/11/2010 10:55:00 AM
Nice write and so well observed, Jimbo! It is always a fun to watch these clever birds. Here at my place are many and they mainly com in entire flocks. It is funny how ther walk arounf looking for food! Thanks for your kind comments and have a great week...Gert
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Date: 7/11/2010 5:22:00 AM
Hi James. Sometimes I wonder what creatures think as they watch us rushing about. Nice write. Did I tell you that I am going to try to start commenting again? I have just been too weepy these past three months…commenting became difficult. I do enjoy reading your wonderful poetry, though. And I appreciate your strengths. Thanks for understanding. God be with you and keep up the excellent writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/8/2010 8:15:00 PM
This was great visual Mr. Goff ! I can see these crows on that sign now...lol, my luck, I wouldn't have seen them, I would have felt them ! *smiles* Have a great night Sir ! james
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Date: 7/7/2010 8:43:00 PM
i enjoyed that, different view point,good one
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