Jua Ng Poet Other

Four by Four

She dreamed of winter
Frost adorning window panes
At night, the marshmallows
Slept in hot cocoa.

She watched the petals
Like seasons, they fell
One by one, alone
We tended the shrine.

Fireflies pierced summer's darkness
With teardrops, golden, painting
A world in warmth
A heart at peace.

Spring awaited our arrival
With blossoms and lanterns,
Coloring the silver grass
With our family portrait.

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Ink Empress February 22, 2024 at 4:28 AM How beautiful is this! Soulfully divine and captivating! I especially loved the stanza” Fireflies pierced summer's darkness With teardrops, golden, painting A world in warmth A heart at peace.” Just stunning! And so descriptive and magical. Pleasure reading this! Congratulations on your well deserved win

Kim Rodrigues February 21, 2024 at 7:03 PM Lovely, Jua! Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2024 at 11:02 AM - Beautifully describe the four seasons, Jua - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Spring is my favorite time :) -

Joseph May February 20, 2024 at 5:25 PM Congrats on your win, Very nicely written