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Poetic Form: Verse
Inspired: 2024 February 17
Image: Earth, Water, Air, & Fire by RSC Education

1. Earth

The designated household steward
Formidable, resourceful, and replenishable
Overseer of life advancement
Protector of the realm 

2. Air

The dynamic life giver
Atmospheric regulator and ventilator
Breathable qualities regenerative properties
Possessor of the realm 

3. Water

The paramount mundane neccesitator
Aquatic shapeshifter's topographical improvements
Liquefied nutrient entities' sustainabilities 
Provider of the realm 

4. Fire

The maintenance of creation
Foundational builder massive molding
Keeper of the Flame
Prudential of the realm

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Ink Empress Date: 2/22/2024 4:44:00 AM A very clean and well articulated poem that is worth the read, i love the flow of your word weaving and also how youv written the 2nd and last stanza stood out for me the most, good to read you after a while. Hope you are doing well, pleasure reading this. Definitely a fave this profound poem is for me Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 2/22/2024 8:27:00 AM Aloha, Ink Empress. I'm fairly moving along, though blackouts continue, so in the eyes of the law, I'm not in control of my faculties. Anyway, I just trudged along at my pace. I'm thrilled to have your fave of this and the wealth of your defining words, my friend. Aloha, William

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/21/2024 11:28:00 AM - A well executed poem ... the poem can be read as four separate poems .. superbly delivered, William :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 2/21/2024 11:33:00 AM I'm truly grateful, Anne-Lise, for your endearing analysis and concluding depictions, my friend. Aloha William

Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/21/2024 8:57:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your very creative write. Love your picture... Have a blessed day............. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 2/21/2024 10:30:00 AM Thank you, Paula. Grateful as always and your thought-filled sharing, my friend. Blessings and Aloha, William

MB Farookh Date: 2/21/2024 7:39:00 AM Congrats, HP. This is so beautifully penned, such insightful thoughts. just too good. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 2/21/2024 10:28:00 AM Thank you, MB. Most appreciative of your shared expressions, my friend. Aloha, William

Joseph May Date: 2/21/2024 4:57:00 AM Congrats on your win, Very nicely done Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 2/21/2024 10:27:00 AM Thank you, Joseph, and as always, the process was interestingly entertaining. Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/20/2024 9:34:00 PM I like the way you ended each stanza. Very clever and congratulations on your win Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 2/20/2024 9:41:00 PM Thanks for the heads-up, Andrea, and your thought-filled expressions, my friend. Aloha, William