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Poetic Form: Verse
Inspired: 2024 February 17
Image: Earth, Water, Air, & Fire by RSC Education

Air, earth, water and fire | Opinion | RSC Education

1. Earth The designated household steward Formidable, resourceful, and replenishable Overseer of life advancement Protector of the realm 2. Air The dynamic life giver Atmospheric regulator and ventilator Breathable qualities regenerative properties Possessor of the realm 3. Water The paramount mundane neccesitator Aquatic shapeshifter's topographical improvements Liquefied nutrient entities' sustainabilities Provider of the realm 4. Fire The maintenance of creation Foundational builder massive molding Keeper of the Flame Prudential of the realm

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Ink Empress

Date: 2/22/2024 4:44:00 AM

A very clean and well articulated poem that is worth the read, i love the flow of your word weaving and also how youv written the 2nd and last stanza stood out for me the most, good to read you after a while. Hope you are doing well, pleasure reading this. Definitely a fave this profound poem is for me

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/22/2024 8:27:00 AM

Aloha, Ink Empress. I'm fairly moving along, though blackouts continue, so in the eyes of the law, I'm not in control of my faculties. Anyway, I just trudged along at my pace. I'm thrilled to have your fave of this and the wealth of your defining words, my friend. Aloha, William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/21/2024 11:28:00 AM

- A well executed poem ... the poem can be read as four separate poems .. superbly delivered, William :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/21/2024 11:33:00 AM

I'm truly grateful, Anne-Lise, for your endearing analysis and concluding depictions, my friend. Aloha William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/21/2024 8:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your very creative write. Love your picture... Have a blessed day.............

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/21/2024 10:30:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. Grateful as always and your thought-filled sharing, my friend. Blessings and Aloha, William

MB Farookh

Date: 2/21/2024 7:39:00 AM

Congrats, HP. This is so beautifully penned, such insightful thoughts. just too good.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/21/2024 10:28:00 AM

Thank you, MB. Most appreciative of your shared expressions, my friend. Aloha, William

Joseph May

Date: 2/21/2024 4:57:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Very nicely done

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/21/2024 10:27:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph, and as always, the process was interestingly entertaining. Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2024 9:34:00 PM

I like the way you ended each stanza. Very clever and congratulations on your win

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/20/2024 9:41:00 PM

Thanks for the heads-up, Andrea, and your thought-filled expressions, my friend. Aloha, William

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/17/2024 4:14:00 PM

incredible, borderline brilliant! I am sincerely impressed with this poem. Loved how you used protector, possessor, provider, and prudential of the realm. I believe this is a great contest entry. Best wishes in the contest. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/17/2024 5:14:00 PM

I must agree, Sara, more so, the likability aspects. Thank you, my friend. Aloha, William