Fountain of Your Love

It burns my soul
shoots up my brain
it's a force i cannot resist nor contain
my thirst to indulge ,drown myself
in the everflowing fountain of your love
the immoral, immortal drink
brings me back from the abyss,from the dreadful brink
the everlasting rainbow
seeded in my heart
rose petals,firey passion,undying desires
bring me to your fountain of love
let me indulge,drown and forever sink
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 11/6/2013 8:21:00 PM
Ashek...... lovely win Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/1/2013 11:03:00 AM
dear all thank you so much for the love support really appreciate this
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Date: 11/1/2013 9:06:00 AM
Congrats on your win, very well deserved! Blessings, Stacey
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:36:00 AM
Ashek, congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 10/31/2013 12:22:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/30/2013 8:14:00 PM
beautiful write....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/30/2013 4:46:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem,Ashek! - Pleased to read good poetry .... Really well written! - Thank you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/29/2013 10:46:00 PM
thank you very much everyone for the support
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Date: 10/29/2013 9:12:00 PM
Ashek, enjoyed your win...LINDA
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:38:00 PM
sizzling emotion. Congrats on the well deserved win :)
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:20:00 PM
Passionate. Enjoyable read.
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Date: 11/30/2011 11:46:00 AM
Yes! Wow! You really put it out there...Very nice.
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Date: 11/2/2011 9:53:00 AM
thank you guys , really appreciate it
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Date: 11/1/2011 4:09:00 PM
Wow, well done! A very heartfelt and captivating read. Love how you ended this poem in a very creative way! And May God Bless!
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Date: 11/1/2011 5:50:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing with us Ashek. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2011 10:33:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your passionate work this afternoon..Sara
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