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Her eyes are brighter yet softened, her tender smile has returned. Her feelings are still kept in, from all the pain she has had to learn. Her beauty is pure and natural, her wisdom is rather rare. She insists to be self conscious, but no longer ignores the stares. Her personality is so magnetic, her energy affecting everyone, she is finally making an effort, when I thought she'd forever run. Her is the she of my interests, she is the her of my heart. We've built a wonderful friendship, as a base for the love affair we start...

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Date: 1/30/2016 4:52:00 AM
Very elegant, Brian, This has a nice easy flow and your emotions are read in every word.A7
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Brian Davey
Date: 1/30/2016 11:03:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/29/2016 10:57:00 PM
Intriguing.....at the start i was thinking 'daughter'?.... but u revealed a lover. Cool poem, i like the one's that makes me think
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Brian Davey
Date: 1/29/2016 11:33:00 PM
Thank you so much I appreciate your comments and happy that you enjoyed the poem

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