Found the Love of My Life

fine gent great looks good job fun car nuff cash dozen kids a deal breaker shoulda read the fine print
AP: 2nd place 2022 Submitted for contest SHOULDA READ THE FINE PRINT_2 sponsored by JOHN LAWLESS - January 20, 2018 - RANKED 5TH
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Gentry Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 11:18 PM
Lol I should think so. Clever!
Gauthier Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 6:29 AM
Thanks, Susan. Lovely Jean who commented below would have been up for the task though. LOL
Canerdy Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 12:35 PM
LOL! Congrats, Line! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Janice.
Murray Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:32 AM
A dozen kids you say? Yet another good sign I'd say Line. Congratulations.
Gauthier Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:53 AM
That's funny after reading your poem this morning, Jean.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 6:39 PM
A real deal breaker. Nice win. Congrats.
Gauthier Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thanks, Sian. Appreciate your visit and comment.
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 5:39 PM
Nicely done, Line, congratulations on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
February 28, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thanks, Eve. Much appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 7:06 PM
STill don't have one yet. I spend too much time down here at Soup and emails. OH MY ( replying to your reply to my comment here at this poem last night)
Gauthier Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 7:51 PM
Gotta keep in touch with everyone - keep everybody happy ;-)
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 8:38 PM
haha, what a GREAT way to do this theme, using a kimo. I love it.
Gauthier Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 1:22 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I look forward to reading your creation.
Michael Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 6:49 PM
A definite deal breaker...All the best Line
Gauthier Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 7:24 PM
Agree, Arturo. More than most could handle.
Smith Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 11:56 AM
Great Entry Line, best wishes...
Gauthier Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Thank you, Charlie. Much appreciated.
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