Found In a Candy Store

some sarsaparilla please chilled Death Valley soda pop fizz with a vintage label 9/19/2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/27/2021 10:05:00 PM

Ah yes! Fun senryu. Now I want to find a Death Valley soda pop label. This will be my new quest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/28/2021 6:31:00 AM

Not something I can have often, but so good!

Robert James Liguori

Date: 9/21/2021 6:08:00 AM

Fun! I want one!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2021 6:45:00 AM

So good! It has to be a rare treat for me…a childhood pop!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/21/2021 3:03:00 AM

Cute one. I don't remember either of those personally but I have heard the name of the candy. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2021 4:58:00 AM

Birch beer

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/21/2021 1:37:00 AM

ah, I feel jealous as I cannot eat sweets. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2021 4:57:00 AM

Brian Strand

Date: 9/21/2021 1:08:00 AM

Sweet shops are a popular poesy theme I notice Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2021 4:57:00 AM

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/20/2021 7:06:00 PM

Great Haiku, Kim, with the perfect illustration and wording. Blessings

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2021 7:28:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad! Delicious.