Found In a Candy Store

some sarsaparilla please
chilled Death Valley soda pop
fizz with a vintage label

9/19/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 10:05 PM
Ah yes! Fun senryu. Now I want to find a Death Valley soda pop label. This will be my new quest.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 6:31 AM
Not something I can have often, but so good!
Liguori Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 6:08 AM
Fun! I want one!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 6:45 AM
So good! It has to be a rare treat for me…a childhood pop!
Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 3:03 AM
Cute one. I don't remember either of those personally but I have heard the name of the candy. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 4:58 AM
Birch beer
Buhagiar Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 1:37 AM
ah, I feel jealous as I cannot eat sweets. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 4:57 AM
:)
Strand Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 1:08 AM
Sweet shops are a popular poesy theme I notice Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 4:57 AM
:)
Poet Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 7:06 PM
Great Haiku, Kim, with the perfect illustration and wording. Blessings
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2021 at 7:28 PM
Thank you, Lasaad! Delicious.
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