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Fossils

Fresh pearls and Rubies
Rich Oysters and precious stones,
      ashes to ashes



Charma

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March 4, 2010 at 4:58 PM

Interesting perspective with a good use of imagery. Much conveyed in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Keep on writing! Karen

A. Kross

March 4, 2010 at 3:35 PM

Thick with possibilities for the mind to take in. Thanks for sharing.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 4, 2010 at 3:07 PM

Expensive Senryu Charma..just the kind I like and a beautiful analogy ...luv.. ashes to ashes... a terrific closing line..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

March 4, 2010 at 2:40 PM

Wonderful imagery, Charma! Unfortunately, there is a lot of truth in the last line and one day we will all be "fossils." Excellent senryu! Love, Carolyn