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Fossils

Fresh pearls and Rubies Rich Oysters and precious stones, ashes to ashes Charma

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/4/2010 3:35:00 PM
Thick with possibilities for the mind to take in. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 3/4/2010 3:07:00 PM
Expensive Senryu Charma..just the kind I like and a beautiful analogy ...luv.. ashes to ashes... a terrific closing line..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/4/2010 2:40:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Charma! Unfortunately, there is a lot of truth in the last line and one day we will all be "fossils." Excellent senryu! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2010 2:10:00 PM
Interesting Senryu. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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