Forty Years and Counting

I was hopelessly smitten in English class, By this girl with a boyfriend, a challenging impasse. She had long shiny locks, the color of auburn, And the curves of a Ferrari, in a hairpin turn. To win her away from that boyfriend's lair, Took getting noticed, to have even a prayer. A skateboard handstand, provided exposure, Upside down I zoomed by, as she search four-leaf clovers. When her best girlfriend, provided the news, My gorgeous sweet red head, now sung the blues. That she and that fellow, a thing in the past, One phone call and BAM, we're dating at last! Now on to her best features, the theme of this prose, And the reason I'd eventually ultimately propose. Then move her from one place to another eight times, As the wife of a Sailor, a career Navy wife. Her full lips frame a gorgeous, welcoming smile, Forty years now, I’ve certainly come to admire. Conveying kindness, but warning all men, She’s spoken for, and quite happily taken. Her most attractive feature has always been clear, Her warmth and genuinely pleasant demeanor. She’s a funny gal, and awfully smart, Four decades of marriage, to my high school sweetheart!
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Gelok Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 10:36 AM
such a kind and thoughtful way to show the world how much you love this amazing gal...great poem.
Gibson Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 8:37 PM
This is witty, cute, romantic and good. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for your visit to my poems.
Kendrick Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 7:42 AM
Enjoyed reading this work today..Very impressive work that is very passionate..I am glad that I chose it today to read..Sara
Wegman Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Thanks Sara. It's a true story and almost exactly how it happened (even the skateboard on our HS campus while my beauty and her beau lay in the tall grass together hunting clovers)! :-)
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 6:51 PM
hmmm, no win for you. What a shame!!! I saw two winners in that whole contest and was dumbfounded.
Wegman Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 8:46 PM
I know right!
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 6:33 PM
WOW, you did a GREAT job if this was for that contest on the best feature. This is REALLY a well written poem and I am rooting for you to place high!
Wegman Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 8:17 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Van Breda Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 10:37 AM
How special !! What an awesome tribute to your wife. Great write-- full of humor and romance Xx~Xx
Wegman Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 9:13 PM
Thank you Kim!
Salter Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 12:47 PM
Brother I certainly will attest, Your sweet, beautiful girl is truly among the best.
Wegman Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 7:04 AM
Thanks sista!
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