Forty Lost

Time moves on,
and soon will tell,
when asked for whom
they ring the bell…
 Forty lived
…and forty lost,
you left before twilight.
When it’s half as much,
at twice the cost,
you’ll  bask
in perfect light…
We live in castles
…made of sand,
we come as a stranger,
but leave as a friend…
Remember now,
your last first kiss,
those times will be
profoundly missed…
Your smile indeed
could cast a spell.
You learned to
play a bad hand well…
With all our hopes
and dreams in tow,
we are old too quick,
and wise too slow.
Life’s an elaborate
complex dance...
Would you live again,
if you had the chance?
 
 Copyright © 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 17, 2014 at 9:56 AM
a very good poem Cole... Love ~SKAT~
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February 17, 2014 at 10:42 AM
Thanks Skat...
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January 7, 2014 at 11:21 AM
Cole, , thank you for everything, Congrats for the well deserved win...always~ Linda
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October 24, 2013 at 6:55 PM
Thanks to everyone for the feedback. I'm glad you appreciate my work... CB
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October 24, 2013 at 6:08 PM
Very artfully crafted and thoroughly enjoyable. The rhyme doesn't get in the way but instead facilitates the message. The final question is haunting.
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October 22, 2013 at 11:37 PM
I would live again, if i had that second chance... great poem....LINDA
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October 22, 2013 at 6:41 PM
Very nice poem Cole. Very nice poem to read. Have a nice rest of the day! -Lymmn
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