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Forty

Frenzied I’m not crossing Fifty per cent of life Feel comfy in my skin Free from frivolity Focused on who I love: Family-my backbone Friends- the air I inhale Written on 09/23/2016 Contest: Pleaides F

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Date: 9/27/2016 2:24:00 PM
Forty is not so bad. Judging by your Pleiades you have a positive attitude about it. Love your last two lines. Congrats on your win, Sara! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/27/2016 3:57:00 AM
- Sara, congratulations on your great wins poems - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2016 5:54:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/23/2016 3:03:00 PM
Fabulous poem Sara good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/23/2016 1:16:00 PM
Nice one, Sara. You're still quite young:) Enjoyed the read!
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Date: 9/23/2016 11:19:00 AM
I'm almost there sweet Sara! Good luck :)-luloo
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