Sara Chansarkar Poet Verse

Forty

Frenzied I’m not crossing
Fifty per cent of life 
Feel comfy in my skin
Free from frivolity
Focused on who I love:
Family-my backbone 
Friends- the air I inhale

Written on 09/23/2016
Contest: Pleaides F

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Kim Merryman September 27, 2016 at 2:24 PM Forty is not so bad. Judging by your Pleiades you have a positive attitude about it. Love your last two lines. Congrats on your win, Sara! Love, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen September 27, 2016 at 3:57 AM - Sara, congratulations on your great wins poems - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison September 26, 2016 at 5:54 PM Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison September 23, 2016 at 3:03 PM Fabulous poem Sara good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Turner September 23, 2016 at 1:16 PM Nice one, Sara. You're still quite young:) Enjoyed the read!

Beautiful Scars September 23, 2016 at 11:19 AM I'm almost there sweet Sara! Good luck :)-luloo