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Fortunate Is An Antonym For You and I

I miss you, You threw me away, Away without a second thought, A thought about how I'll hurt, Hurt like the five other girls you played with, Without a goodbye you left, You left with cruel words upon your lips, Your lips I've always wanted to kiss, To kiss so tenderly and heartbreakingly, And heartbreaking is all I feel, I feel your eyes upon me as I pass, I pass like we had no past, Our past was one big lie, A lie you gratefully tell, Tell to anyone who will listen, Listen with open ears, With open ears I hear, Hear all the tall tales, Tales about you and I, I being the less fortunate, Fortunate is an antonym for you and I.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/17/2010 10:43:00 AM
Interesting love loss write.. Sorry about the broken relationship if it is life...Sara
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:47:00 AM
Enjoyed this poetry from you today and will read more, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:19:00 PM
Great poem Sara. I love the style it is in and i love the word choice. Matt
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Date: 7/7/2010 3:38:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Sara. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2010 11:35:00 AM
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