Fortunate Is An Antonym For You and I

I miss you,
You threw me away,
Away without a second thought,
A thought about how I'll hurt,
Hurt like the five other girls you played with,
Without a goodbye you left,
You left with cruel words upon your lips,
Your lips I've always wanted to kiss,
To kiss so tenderly and heartbreakingly,
And heartbreaking is all I feel,
I feel your eyes upon me as I pass,
I pass like we had no past,
Our past was one big lie,
A lie you gratefully tell,
Tell to anyone who will listen,
Listen with open ears,
With open ears I hear,
Hear all the tall tales,
Tales about you and I,
I being the less fortunate,
Fortunate is an antonym for you and I.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Interesting love loss write.. Sorry about the broken relationship if it is life...Sara
Rich Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Enjoyed this poetry from you today and will read more, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.
Pawlak Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 7:19 PM
Great poem Sara. I love the style it is in and i love the word choice. Matt
Brown Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 3:38 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Sara. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol
Thomas Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 11:35 AM
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