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Written 20 0ctober 2025 for Forts and Castles Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish

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Forts and Castles


                                                                 Forts and Castles


                                          Carved stones shooting up so high in the sky,
                                             Forts and castles dazzle the doubtful eyes,
                                             Old and yet strong, they have a tale to tell,
                                              Tale of splendour that keep us under spell.
  
                                              Walls of forts so thick, a sturdy stronghold,
                                          Keeping safe, men and women, young and old,
                                          Fortified with soldiers, brave with swords bright,
                                           Are set to guard their land with all their might.

                                                  Within castles lies a bustling place,
                                               People moving, steadily at their pace,
                                                Ladies dancing, in traditional gowns,
                                            Listening to sweet music, gentle sounds.

                                      Kings or queens in crowns of gold  rule the sway,
                                               Humorous stories, whispered everyday,
                                           Sumptuous banquets held in halls so grand,
                                        With lavish food and drink, more for the band.

                                          Now forts and castles stand in quiet grace,
                                               Mostly a memory of time and place,
                                            National heritage, weathered, by years,
                                          Whispering silent secrets through our ears.
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Leake Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 3:48 AM
Nicely done Krishnanand Enjoyed the rhyme Best wishes Kevin
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October 22, 2025 at 12:54 PM
Thank you poet friend for appreciating the above poem and for your kind wishes. May you have an enjoyable day.
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