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Forsaken

Forgotten lie the graves of the forsaken, long unremembered, strangled by the grasses of neglect. Misbegotten, forever mute they fester, worm-mingled, mercy less, without a vestige of respect.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/9/2008 12:58:00 PM
Well this is just plain sad. Well written and unfortunately true for many. I cannot end here, so I shall go onto another one of your poems for now. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/6/2008 10:53:00 AM
Line 3 is simply amazing. Love the phrase "the grasses of neglect". Soul stirring, sad poetry. Beautiful! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/6/2008 8:06:00 AM
Love the image in L3 Keith.Excellent poetry.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 12/6/2008 3:37:00 AM
Well, that is a very sad reflection, indeed. Excellent, excellent collection of words here - very tight. dark, but brilliant. love, Kristin
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