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Forsaken

homeless hopelessly lost and adrift
not belonging and living on borrowed time
a stray in god's land



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2019

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Caren Krutsinger

September 3, 2019 at 6:00 AM

As I get older, I see it every day.

September 3, 2019 at 6:48 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

September 2, 2019 at 7:47 PM

so very true...from the moment we first breathe we are borrowing time until our breath stops, unknowing when... I really liked this one Line :) hugs

September 2, 2019 at 10:05 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sandra.

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