Formless and Void

Formless And Void

Do bugs and rats infest your home
evil thoughts
in your mind they roam
who is who when your all alone

if I were you I'd commit suicide
while still alive
and become a new person deep inside
draw close to our father in heaven
while there's still time
the world we built is a carcass
maggots feed and die while the evil flies
still I believe that I've found some ground
that is to say, I think I see the light
can one stand here in the formless and void
become a strange curiosity passing by
until the Lord comes with judgment
and to resurrect this old carcass
back to life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 1:35 PM
Great thought provoking write...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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