Vilmos Zoltan Galyo Poet Rhyme

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Forlornness In The Lonely Life

Life, so many, I don’t know how many lived in this land
How many lived in this local world? Here, can you see?

But I can feel their past, oh, incredible, this atmosphere!
Very magnetic, always brings me here. Never felt before
                                                               Never felt before!

Never. This place is a super mind. A high real eternal life
That is what I am looking for in life. But burning my past

A thousand-year-old graveyard and the church. Oh, Time!
This feeling and impression take me here. My inspirations

No, not the inspirations. Not just that. – Different. Untouchable
Old age. Yes. In ancient times. From. All were dynamic lives

Hmm. They left their experiences, loves, and sufferings. Here
When I come here, I live in their lives. Magnetized my mind

Oh, Life! Life! Please! Open, open the door to these lives!
I want walk and live in their life, in their lives. Give it Time!

Give it. I need, I need to get their noble lives. Live the past!
Because this atmosphere is not human-like. More than. High

Very high
I cannot recognize
The origin of this life

I hope
I will be buried 
In this amazing life

I want to die
I want to die
In this graveyard

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Daniel Henry Rodgers January 21, 2026 at 4:08 PM Hello Vilmos, your words made me feel drawn into a place that feels heavy with memory and longing. The way you speak to the graveyard and ask to live inside other lives feels raw and open, especially the lines about wanting to be buried there. Being a counselor, I can relate to your feelings here. Winter Blessings, Vilmos, Daniel