forlorn farewell


petals fall flaccid
without farewell requiem...
spring symphony waits
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Kauffman Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 12:12 PM
Sublimal, congratulations on your win with this beautifully written haiku that expresses the passing of one season into another without grief and with expectation! Blessings on each of your seasons.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 9:13 PM
Thank you, Sam, so much for your read and for the wonderful comments that enthuse and delight me. Best' wishes.
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