Brian Strand Poet Verse

Forlorn

Silent
           the mowers
in 
Spring
                   gardens
awash
           with April
rain
                   forlorn
the days-eye
off-white
half-open
                     morn
wistful
           waiting
a
warm
                 dawn
I
doze and
dream
                  of
                  you

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 7, 2012 at 11:35 AM When I click on one of your poems I know it will be truly exceptional Brian. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

Katie Telling April 28, 2012 at 12:28 PM This is beautiful, so peaceful... Thanks so much for placement in your contest, it is such an honor. I look forward to reading more of your work!

Broken Butterfly April 28, 2012 at 4:19 AM Yes, Brian Spring is all about waiting and dreaming, lovely poem and thank you for my placement in your 10 line contest, it is always a thrill to place in one of your contests,

Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2012 at 11:27 PM I love how it ends so romantically, Brian. Very lovely images!

Sara Kendrick April 27, 2012 at 4:23 PM Good one that has a touch of romance..Enjoyed reading..Sara

Joann Grisetti April 27, 2012 at 8:51 AM Sure hope they get their rain. Nicely done.

David Williams April 27, 2012 at 5:13 AM Brian, poetic words indeed, I like the way you did it like rain drops, have a good weekend..David