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Forlorn

Silent the mowers in Spring gardens awash with April rain forlorn the days-eye off-white half-open morn wistful waiting a warm dawn I doze and dream of you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/7/2012 11:35:00 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be truly exceptional Brian. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2012 12:28:00 PM
This is beautiful, so peaceful... Thanks so much for placement in your contest, it is such an honor. I look forward to reading more of your work!
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Date: 4/28/2012 4:19:00 AM
Yes, Brian Spring is all about waiting and dreaming, lovely poem and thank you for my placement in your 10 line contest, it is always a thrill to place in one of your contests,
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Date: 4/27/2012 11:27:00 PM
I love how it ends so romantically, Brian. Very lovely images!
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Date: 4/27/2012 4:23:00 PM
Good one that has a touch of romance..Enjoyed reading..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2012 8:51:00 AM
Sure hope they get their rain. Nicely done.
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Date: 4/27/2012 5:13:00 AM
Brian, poetic words indeed, I like the way you did it like rain drops, have a good weekend..David
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