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Forlorn

fistful of time flew
 yet deep sorrow keeps weighing
         his heavy heart down


Date written: 09/08/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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September 10, 2019 at 2:51 PM
The one who loses a true love, FEEL WEIGHT IN THE HEART ...   SALUTE DEAR EDWARD alkas
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September 10, 2019 at 4:43 PM
True indeed! Thank you, AP:-)
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September 8, 2019 at 5:24 PM
Know this weighty feeling - you delivered it thoroughly. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 6:02 PM
Thank you, CayCay:-)
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